JohnCaspar
Level 1 Valued Member
Hey all,
So I have been working on a small "project" with a service buddy of mine that I would like some critique on. Well, we started a fitness/ workout website that will be dedicated to different kinds of exercise guides and exercise-related articles. Been working on it for a little while now, and we have had some mixed signals coming in on it (mostly positive, on the writing part), but we where missing some more expert reviews on it
So that's why I'm asking this community for critique (there seems to be a quite wide range of people here, from beginners to experts on their fields... or at least people who know their s''''' ).
But what exactly do I want your opinion on? Well here's a quick list:
1. Are the articles written well enough and are they actually readable. The thing is that I'm not really a "native" English speaker, so I'm afraid that I don't always make myself clear enough to drive the point I'm trying to make home. (this sentence is probably a great example of that- sorry)
2. Is the layout of the articles clear enough
And absolutely any other kind of critique would be great. And I'm definitely not looking for a pat on the back or a good job here- NOPE. I want you guys to bring out any negative aspects about it or at least things that could be improved. Because that's the point here- to try to give the best quality content that people could really benefit from.
Been focusing on writing different articles and guides on the deadlift right now. Here is an exercise guide I recently wrote: Shovel deadlift.
Hope you tear it apart No really hope you can help me improve it, by shooting weak points at me.
Thank you all!
So I have been working on a small "project" with a service buddy of mine that I would like some critique on. Well, we started a fitness/ workout website that will be dedicated to different kinds of exercise guides and exercise-related articles. Been working on it for a little while now, and we have had some mixed signals coming in on it (mostly positive, on the writing part), but we where missing some more expert reviews on it
So that's why I'm asking this community for critique (there seems to be a quite wide range of people here, from beginners to experts on their fields... or at least people who know their s''''' ).
But what exactly do I want your opinion on? Well here's a quick list:
1. Are the articles written well enough and are they actually readable. The thing is that I'm not really a "native" English speaker, so I'm afraid that I don't always make myself clear enough to drive the point I'm trying to make home. (this sentence is probably a great example of that- sorry)
2. Is the layout of the articles clear enough
And absolutely any other kind of critique would be great. And I'm definitely not looking for a pat on the back or a good job here- NOPE. I want you guys to bring out any negative aspects about it or at least things that could be improved. Because that's the point here- to try to give the best quality content that people could really benefit from.
Been focusing on writing different articles and guides on the deadlift right now. Here is an exercise guide I recently wrote: Shovel deadlift.
Hope you tear it apart No really hope you can help me improve it, by shooting weak points at me.
Thank you all!